This is a record of my learning during my time at Gilberthorpe School.
Good work Hannah. You have thought of some great ways to show you care for others. I like that you treat people how you would like to be treated.Next steps are to check your punctuation to see if you have commas and fullstops in the right place.
Ok Mrs Pam Thx for the advice.
Hi Hannah it's Roxy here I like how you have put five reason'sof why we should care for others.
Thank you Roxy but always remember to put punctuation in.
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Good work Hannah. You have thought of some great ways to show you care for others. I like that you treat people how you would like to be treated.Next steps are to check your punctuation to see if you have commas and fullstops in the right place.
ReplyDeleteOk Mrs Pam
DeleteThx for the advice.
Hi Hannah it's Roxy here
ReplyDeleteI like how you have put five reason's
of why we should care for others.
Thank you Roxy but always remember to put punctuation in.
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